Saturday, August 13, 2011

I am

Welcome to the world of broken hopes. She had everything done and surrounded herself with things and people she loved. She draw the path to her future... but she made a mistake, a mistake that will not erase the stuff around her but will certainly ruin all of her plans and she no longer has ink to draw another one.

She has to step up in front of everybody and tell the truth: "I´m..."

6 comments:

charleslmashburn said...

Interesting write. Leaving us with a question to be answered. I like it! Let's the reader form a story in their own mind. Wonderful!

charleslmashburn said...

Sorry. Forgot to leavee you this link to one of my poems I think you might enjoy: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/26/dearest-wife/

leonargo.com said...

I too wonder what she is going to say. Nice write.

The Cello Strings said...

fabulous.

you make us wonder what's next.
wow.

tasithoughts said...

Great cliffhanger...for us to ponder.

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/

Marinela Reka said...

So nicely done!

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