I cannot think. Ideas are stucked in the deepest side of my brain.
Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words. It´s like it was written in another language: a language without words, made of sounds, sensations and images.
I cannot say it! Why can´t I?
I really need to say it...
Leave.
Why do they always leave? Because I do not have the courage to do it myself: "What if? What if I wait a little bit more?"
Stay.
Why would they stay? Can I stay? Should I stay?
Dream, leave, part... please stay.
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11 comments:
An intense moment that is only made known beyond words.. I have been through it and usually, I draw.. :)
A very beautiful piece.
I feel a lot that words have no way around my felings..and at these times, I wish I were a musician.
I feel the tension in this piece and the appeal in the last line is so resonant and strong. Very easy to relate to. Music, art....or just time passing - life is the answer I feel!
I could relate to the first few lines, the first two especially were very beautiful, Lu Ann! Thank you for sharing! :)
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bellisima ! brava!
Luna
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...Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words...
...I know that feeling...felt.
honest reflection,
bless you.
hope all is better after writing this out.
stay blessed.
i can relate to this... confusion mars the mind and heart.
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/getting-high-on-sobriety.html
leave...stay.....such contradicting words.....
i like the poem's contradicting thoughts....
This poem reminds me of a conversation
that everyone might have at some time. You covered all the thoughts in one poem. Beautiful blog!
It looks like you are off to a great start with your poems, awards and comments.
It sounds like indecisions,or maybe something makind the doubt of staying... great as always! :) bp!
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