Friday, April 22, 2011

Stay.


I cannot think. Ideas are stucked in the deepest side of my brain.
Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words. It´s like it was written in another language: a language without words, made of sounds, sensations and images.
I cannot say it! Why can´t I?
I really need to say it...
Leave.
Why do they always leave? Because I do not have the courage to do it myself: "What if? What if I wait a little bit more?"
Stay.
Why would they stay? Can I stay? Should I stay?
Dream, leave, part... please stay.

Taking part in Thursday Poet´s Rally

11 comments:

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

An intense moment that is only made known beyond words.. I have been through it and usually, I draw.. :)

Maha said...

A very beautiful piece.
I feel a lot that words have no way around my felings..and at these times, I wish I were a musician.

poetry-diary.com said...

I feel the tension in this piece and the appeal in the last line is so resonant and strong. Very easy to relate to. Music, art....or just time passing - life is the answer I feel!

Vinay said...

I could relate to the first few lines, the first two especially were very beautiful, Lu Ann! Thank you for sharing! :)

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Jingle Poetry said...

bellisima ! brava!

Luna


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Dasuntoucha said...

...Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words...

...I know that feeling...felt.

Jingle said...

honest reflection,
bless you.

hope all is better after writing this out.

stay blessed.

Bing (PinkLady) said...

i can relate to this... confusion mars the mind and heart.

http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/getting-high-on-sobriety.html

moonscribbles said...

leave...stay.....such contradicting words.....
i like the poem's contradicting thoughts....

ksquaredpoetry said...

This poem reminds me of a conversation
that everyone might have at some time. You covered all the thoughts in one poem. Beautiful blog!

It looks like you are off to a great start with your poems, awards and comments.

Gugo said...

It sounds like indecisions,or maybe something makind the doubt of staying... great as always! :) bp!