Friday, April 22, 2011

Stay.


I cannot think. Ideas are stucked in the deepest side of my brain.
Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words. It´s like it was written in another language: a language without words, made of sounds, sensations and images.
I cannot say it! Why can´t I?
I really need to say it...
Leave.
Why do they always leave? Because I do not have the courage to do it myself: "What if? What if I wait a little bit more?"
Stay.
Why would they stay? Can I stay? Should I stay?
Dream, leave, part... please stay.

Taking part in Thursday Poet´s Rally

11 comments:

The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side) said...

An intense moment that is only made known beyond words.. I have been through it and usually, I draw.. :)

Maha said...

A very beautiful piece.
I feel a lot that words have no way around my felings..and at these times, I wish I were a musician.

Anonymous said...

I feel the tension in this piece and the appeal in the last line is so resonant and strong. Very easy to relate to. Music, art....or just time passing - life is the answer I feel!

Vinay Leo R. said...

I could relate to the first few lines, the first two especially were very beautiful, Lu Ann! Thank you for sharing! :)

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Anonymous said...

bellisima ! brava!

Luna


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Dasuntoucha said...

...Today, as never before, I know exactly how I feel, I understand it, but I can´t write it in words...

...I know that feeling...felt.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

honest reflection,
bless you.

hope all is better after writing this out.

stay blessed.

Bing Yap said...

i can relate to this... confusion mars the mind and heart.

http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/getting-high-on-sobriety.html

Anonymous said...

leave...stay.....such contradicting words.....
i like the poem's contradicting thoughts....

Anonymous said...

This poem reminds me of a conversation
that everyone might have at some time. You covered all the thoughts in one poem. Beautiful blog!

It looks like you are off to a great start with your poems, awards and comments.

Gugo said...

It sounds like indecisions,or maybe something makind the doubt of staying... great as always! :) bp!