Monday, June 27, 2011

18th


"You keep on surprising me" I said to you as you held my hand.
We were there, together and just breathing. We needed nothing else but to know that we were next to each other and that our friendship was being blessed by God.
We stayed quiet for a long, long time... I felt the air playing around with my hair and I felt your presence next to me, then I thought as I looked at the trees around us that I was happy, probably happier than I had ever been before and I knew that it could not be more perfect than this: me on my 18th birthday at a beautiful place in a wonderful time of my life, eating delicious food, under an amazing sky, being near the Almighty God and sitting next to an extraordinary man...

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Such a warm and touching poem. What a beautiful moment you've captured, such a sense of love

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

a delight to read you..

Happy Rally.

Helena said...

Sweet! My 18th birthday was slighty different......and not so warming!

Unknown said...

invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
smiles.
hope to see your in.
Happy Saturday.

Gugo said...

Amazing day indeed, a pleasure and honor to share that day with you! :) thnak you for all, and thank God for your life!